From 2a90b532600c9d645c7a77d440914ec85dfa6ea5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Andy Wingo Date: Mon, 10 Feb 2020 17:17:20 +0100 Subject: Address GSC feedback for point (d) --- pages/gnu/gsc-feedback.txt | 2 +- pages/gnu/social-contract.txt | 7 +++---- 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) (limited to 'pages') diff --git a/pages/gnu/gsc-feedback.txt b/pages/gnu/gsc-feedback.txt index 3c04115..f888651 100644 --- a/pages/gnu/gsc-feedback.txt +++ b/pages/gnu/gsc-feedback.txt @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ statement. ## (d) GNU and the broader free software community -With rgards to the original text: "Free software extends beyond the GNU +With regards to the original text: "Free software extends beyond the GNU Project, which works with companion free software projects that develop key components of the GNU System. The GNU Project aims to extend the reach of free software to new fields." diff --git a/pages/gnu/social-contract.txt b/pages/gnu/social-contract.txt index bc6c3e5..2ea6f49 100644 --- a/pages/gnu/social-contract.txt +++ b/pages/gnu/social-contract.txt @@ -35,10 +35,9 @@ ensure consistency across packages. ## The GNU Project collaborates with the broader free software community -Free software extends beyond the GNU Project, which works with -companion free software projects that develop key components of the -GNU System. The GNU Project aims to extend the reach of free software -to new fields. +The GNU Project works together with other free software projects to +advance its goals, and aims to extend the reach of the project beyond +the GNU System. ## The GNU Project welcomes contributions from all and everyone -- cgit v1.2.1